Pages

Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Patriot's Pen Essay

Author's Note: This is a essay our writing class had to write about what we would say to the founding fathers.


Would you ever be willing to give up your life for other  people's freedom? Well the founding fathers of the United States of America did just that. They stood up to the British government and never stopped fighting for our country’s freedom. I respect them very much for that, but there are a few specific things that I would like to acknowledge.
If I had a chance to stop slavery what would I have done? This is one of the few things the founding fathers could have done much better. Once they won the Revolutionary War they should have invested their time and money into stopping slavery. Slavery is, in my opinion one of the worst things that occurred in the history of the world. Furthermore, because the founding fathers were unable to banish slavery in the United States it continued throughout the Civil War; but that is unacceptable. Slaves had been trying to stand up for themselves for hundreds of years. Although a small number of slaves were able to gain freedom, others were still enslaved because the owners did not care enough about them to accept them as human beings. Slavery was an issue that should have been resolved right from the start of the country’s establishment. Had this been addressed, perhaps the Civil War could have been prevented.
Although slavery was a terrible thing, the founding fathers did do some things very well such as fighting England in the Revolutionary War. The Red Coats were driven out of their own land by the colonists who fought tirelessly for to create a country of their own. The Constitution of the United States was officially signed on July 4th, 1776. But given the opportunity, I would ask the founding fathers how they had the courage to unselfishly put their lives, and the lives of many others on the line for people they had never met. It would take so much courage to stand up for others’ freedom like that. Some people think about standing up to others, but only the true heroes follow through like our founding fathers did. In addition, the founding fathers fought along with many soldiers for our freedom. All soldiers knew they probably would not come out alive, but they desired for America to be free. For that, I would tell the founding fathers I am amazed of their leadership and knowledge of the situation. They controlled the war very well and were able to defeat the British in order form a new country.
The founding fathers were able to establish a prominent country after the victory of the Revolutionary War. They launched a strong government from the start. Additionally, the country elected George Washington as the very first president of the United States after the signing of the Constitution. The country thrived under Washington; it was able to get off to an astounding start. There were many great cities and villages established during the first half century of the U.S. They flourished because of their independence from England. I feel Washington was the best president a country could ask for.
Washington and the other founding fathers were able to govern a new country that was ecstatic to have their freedom. I applaud them for being able to take on such immense work.

Friday, October 12, 2012

Pi Patel's Journey

Author's Note: This is a cause and effect piece on the book Life of Pi by Yann Martel. There will also be an analyzing of the climax. Spoiler alert!!!

     The climax of the story was when Pi Patel's cargo ship began to sink. The Tsimtsu sank because of a giant storm in the Pacific ocean. The storm rattled the boat and made a gaping hole in the side of it. As the ship began to sink Pi should have made a greater effort to reach his family. If he would've been able to retrieve them he might have been able to live a much better life afterward. Additionally even if he was on the ship without his family he should have made a greater effort to find the captain to ask him what was going on.
     If the Tsimtsu had not sank then the story would've been extremely different. Pi Patel and his family would've landed in Canada and had a pleasant life with the animals. In addition Pi wouldn't have had that terrible journey through the Pacific Ocean while having some very disturbing experiences.

Friday, October 5, 2012

Alex Rider's Revenge

Authors Note: This is a piece on Conflict and Resolution in Alex Rider Stormbreaker. Also spoiler alert.


     In the book Stormbreaker a young boy named Alex has lost his parents, he lives with his uncle and his housekeeper Jack. But then his uncle is mysteriously killed. He is facing a person vs person situation in this book. The conflict Alex faces is finding out how to find his parents. Alex eventually realizes that he must work for MI6 to solve the problem. He then has to work for them on a mission and he learns that a evil man killed his uncle and he also killed his parents.
     If Alex would not have accepted the invitation he might not have learned about his parents and uncle. He also would not have been a hero to all of England. Alex Rider should be happy that he was able to work with MI6.

Thursday, October 4, 2012

Her 16th


Authors Note: This is a personal narrative of the time my sister received a car for her sixteenth birthday.

Her 16th

When I arose on April 16th I suddenly realized that it was my sister Jennifer’s 16th birthday. We were giving her a car for her birthday. My parents were afraid that she knew she was getting a car. She had been looking and showing us cars that she wanted but then after a while she stopped looking.
After I got dressed my assignment was to wake Jennifer up, and bring her downstairs. It may sound easy but  trust me it isn’t easy waking up a drowsy 16 year old even if it’s her birthday. I snuck into her room and nudged her gently… nothing. Then I tried shaking her a little… still nothing. Finally I shook her violently and the response I got was a quiet and muffled “What?”
“You know what!” I exclaimed. “It’s your 16th birthday; you should be excited.”
“I’d be excited if you would let me sleep,” she retorted sarcastically.
“Come on, please just come down stairs and open your presents?” I requested.
“Fine.” She countered, as she rolled her eyes at me.
So I got her to get out of bed and get dressed. She then followed me downstairs and discovered the presents on the table. I told her that we had to go into the garage for her present and then her face lit up. I slowly pulled open the door and my mom and dad yelled “SURPRISE!”
“Oh my gosh! I can’t believe it!” she cried. “You got me a car! Thank you so much.”
“You are very welcome, did you suspect that you were receiving a car?” My dad questioned.
“No, I had lost all hope.” She answered ironically.
“Good, I was afraid that you knew you were getting one because you stopped looking online for cars.” He said.
My mom all the while was just standing there smiling. “You’re lucky you have such a loving father.” She explained.
“I know.” She understood. “He is a very nice father.”
She took my dad and I for a ride around our neighborhood. Although it wasn’t a great new car she liked her used car from 1999. She was very enthused about her it. Also, I was glad that I got to play a role in presenting it to her. I hope that she will remember that moment forever.