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Tuesday, October 16, 2012

Patriot's Pen Essay

Author's Note: This is a essay our writing class had to write about what we would say to the founding fathers.


Would you ever be willing to give up your life for other  people's freedom? Well the founding fathers of the United States of America did just that. They stood up to the British government and never stopped fighting for our country’s freedom. I respect them very much for that, but there are a few specific things that I would like to acknowledge.
If I had a chance to stop slavery what would I have done? This is one of the few things the founding fathers could have done much better. Once they won the Revolutionary War they should have invested their time and money into stopping slavery. Slavery is, in my opinion one of the worst things that occurred in the history of the world. Furthermore, because the founding fathers were unable to banish slavery in the United States it continued throughout the Civil War; but that is unacceptable. Slaves had been trying to stand up for themselves for hundreds of years. Although a small number of slaves were able to gain freedom, others were still enslaved because the owners did not care enough about them to accept them as human beings. Slavery was an issue that should have been resolved right from the start of the country’s establishment. Had this been addressed, perhaps the Civil War could have been prevented.
Although slavery was a terrible thing, the founding fathers did do some things very well such as fighting England in the Revolutionary War. The Red Coats were driven out of their own land by the colonists who fought tirelessly for to create a country of their own. The Constitution of the United States was officially signed on July 4th, 1776. But given the opportunity, I would ask the founding fathers how they had the courage to unselfishly put their lives, and the lives of many others on the line for people they had never met. It would take so much courage to stand up for others’ freedom like that. Some people think about standing up to others, but only the true heroes follow through like our founding fathers did. In addition, the founding fathers fought along with many soldiers for our freedom. All soldiers knew they probably would not come out alive, but they desired for America to be free. For that, I would tell the founding fathers I am amazed of their leadership and knowledge of the situation. They controlled the war very well and were able to defeat the British in order form a new country.
The founding fathers were able to establish a prominent country after the victory of the Revolutionary War. They launched a strong government from the start. Additionally, the country elected George Washington as the very first president of the United States after the signing of the Constitution. The country thrived under Washington; it was able to get off to an astounding start. There were many great cities and villages established during the first half century of the U.S. They flourished because of their independence from England. I feel Washington was the best president a country could ask for.
Washington and the other founding fathers were able to govern a new country that was ecstatic to have their freedom. I applaud them for being able to take on such immense work.