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Wednesday, January 23, 2013

Darry's Point of View



Author’s Note: This is a prediction piece on Darry’s point of view during the scene where he slapped Ponyboy.
Darry’s Point of View
I have been waiting nervously for Ponyboy for almost 3 hours. If he does not come home soon I’ll definitely have to call the cops. I’m too nervous--I should maybe read a book-- no I’ll read the newspaper. Maybe that will calm me down before he gets home, if he ever does. I cannot believe he would disobey me and stay out late like that. If I ever did that to Mom or Dad they would flip out on me, although they would probably forgive me eventually. That’s how it will go when Ponyboy gets home. Everything is alright now he’s just a little late.
While I was reading the newspaper I heard the door slam shut in one swift motion. I jumped up from my seat, disregarding the newspaper. I saw Ponyboy and I immediately started screaming at him, “It’s two in the morning, I was about to call the police and have them look for you!” Ponyboy stirred nervously while I continued to holler, “Where in the world were you!” Then Ponyboy said something that I wish he would not have.
“I fell asleep in the lot.” Ponyboy stammered.
“You what!!! You know it’s dangerous out there. You should never go near that lot at night. You should not even go there during the day.”
Ponyboy stuttered, “W-w-well, sorry.”
“Sorry does not cut it!” I shouted and then I slapped him as hard as I possibly could. I’m not exactly sure what happened after that but Ponyboy started sobbing and he ran out the door. Then I did something that I knew I would eventually regret… I just let Ponyboy run...

Monday, January 21, 2013

Ponyboy's Point of View


Author’s Note: This is a point of view response on The Outsiders by: S.E. Hinton. It analyzes the main character, or Ponyboy's point of view.
Ponyboy’s Point of View
          In The Outsiders by: S.E. Hinton, there are two rival gangs of teenagers; the greasers and the Socs (socials). The Socs drive around in their mustang’s jumping greasers. Ponyboy and Johnny, who are young greasers get jumped one day while trying to run away from home. Johnny loses his cool and kills a Soc, therefore they have no choice but to leave their already broken households. This story is written in Ponyboy’s point of view. From Ponyboy’s point of view, characters in the story are described in a way that allows the reader to understand the other characters, in a way perspectives of others wouldn’t allow.
                One way that the perspective of the story would change was during the scene when Ponyboy gets slapped by his older brother Darry. In Ponyboy’s perspective Darry is no fun, he also thinks that Darry hates him, finally he thinks that Darry is just a workaholic. What Ponyboy doesn’t know is if Darry stopped working they would not be able to afford living costs. When both of their parents died in a tragic car accident Darry had to pass up on a football scholarship so he could support his family. If this particular scene was told from Darry’s point of view, it would tremendously alter the reader’s thoughts on the situation. Someone who read The Outsiders would then be thinking about how mad Darry was and not about how much Ponyboy hated his brother. The reader would also be feeling bad for him because he was trying to help Ponyboy but Ponyboy never listened to him, but as the story is told from Ponyboy’s point of view it makes Darry seem like the bad guy in all scenes.
                This book would be changed a lot if it was written in Darry’s point of view. Some of the scenes would not be in the book and others would be completely different. One scene specifically would be altered greatly  would be the scene when Ponyboy and Johnny had already run away and Darry had to figure out what to do. The reader would experience the intense emotion that Darry was feeling. Also the reader would 
not be able to listen to Sodapop talk to Darry. Additionaly if Darry knew that Ponyboy went to Dally he would have been even more scared because he would have known that Dally gave Ponyboy and Johnny a gun. Overall the whole book would be extremely different.

Wednesday, January 9, 2013

50-50

50-50
Eleven year old John Webster had no idea what was about to happen to him. He was an innocent little child who was carrying just a little too much cash in his hands for the mean streets of Detroit. Everyone knew carrying too much cash often caused a lot of trouble, very fast.  Even as a child, John Webster knew what happened on the streets of Detroit, and it terrified him incredibly. His parents didn’t know he could see their TV through his cracked open bedroom door, and that was how John knew about everything that happened, as long as it was on the 9:00pm news.
As John continued down the mean streets of Detroit, suddenly he heard something, or someone stirring behind him. I should really be heading home now, he figured. Impatiently, he picked up his pace and noticed a figure out of the corner of his eye. Could It be?, he wondered, no I’ve just been watching the news too often, he concluded. But as young John turned the corner, he was mugged by three men that apeared to be wearing big numbers on their black jackets.
Hours later, John’s parents, Martha and Mike, sat anxiously beside his hospital bed. It terrified them to think of their son laying helplessly in a coma, when just hours ago he was walking home through the streets of Detroit. The doctors had recently informed John’s parents, the longer someone is in a coma; the higher the chances are they won’t wake up. After hearing this the Webster parents were shell shocked. They asked the doctor what the chances were John would wake up. After a painfully long silence, the doctor answered, “It’s a 50-50 chance.” Astonished, John’s parents gasped in horror.
“Y-you-you mean that his chances of life and death are the same?” retorted Martha, furious at anyone who could think to hurt her son.
“Yes,” the doctor answered nervously, “Sadly, that is the case. I wish I could tell you better news, but there is nothing I can do at this point, but wait along with the two of you. I am so sorry.”
“Well, I think that we need a little bit of time alone, Doctor Jones,” said Mike.
“Yes, of course,” Dr. Jones replied.
Mike and Martha closed the door behind Doctor Jones. Martha was uncomfortable, and it showed with the long silences between the two of them. “I can’t believe we let John walk around the mean streets of Detroit alone,” Martha said as she broke the silence.
“Well,” stated John, “it wasn’t really our fault.”
“Not our fault!” Maria yelled, “How could you possibly think that this was not our fault?”
“Quiet down. This room isn’t sound proof,” Mike snapped. “People can hear us.”
“I don’t care how crazy we sound! It’s our son and he was so badly injured his life is on the line!”
“I know, but that doesn’t mean that we need to be yelling. You know we could be adults and talk with inside voices,” Mike retorted with impatience toward Martha.
“Oh, pish posh! You and your kindergarten talk. Talk in inside voices, blah, blah, blah.” Maria stated mockingly.
“Hey, I was just resorting to what I know best! We always had to talk to John’s teachers about that,” Mike declared. “But never mind that! What we should be talking about is why we gave him that much money to walk with around town. Maybe if he didn’t have all of that money for the night, or if we would have communicated better, and he had gotten picked up on time, then he wouldn’t have gotten mugged.”
“Of course he wouldn’t have gotten mugged! The only reason he got mugged in the first place is because someone knew he was carrying all that money,” Maria yapped.
“Fine, whatever, what we need to know is…” Mike retorted before he was cut off when the door instantaneously burst open.
Dr Jones cried, “Little Johnny just woke up!”
Maria sat speechless, but Mike answered, “W-w-what do you mean, is he out of the coma? Is he back with us and among the living?”
“Yes! Amazingly, he is alive! I just happen to be in the room checking his pulse when I noticed he opened his eyes,” the doctor excitedly stated.
“I am speechless, but it’s the, it’s the, the, the best news I’ve heard all evening!” Martha stuttered.
“I would have to agree with you on that, Martha,” Doctor Jones said.
“Soooo…” Mike and Maria stated simultaneously.
“So, do you want to go see your son, or keep talking about it out here in the hallway?”
“Okay, take us to John!” Mike said with a certain excitement in his voice.
Swiftly, John’s parents walked out of the conference room, and Maria whispered to her husband, “We should be so thankful John is awake and with us again.” As they walked down the hallway, Mike thought to himself, am I dreaming this, or will I really see my son looking into my eyes once again?
 They continued down the corridor until they reached John’s room. “After you,” said Dr Jones.
Impatiently, Mike nodded, opened the door and noticed that there was a TV with the news on in the background… Mike saw his son lying up in his hospital bed. For several minutes, Mike stood motionless realizing he would not have been able to stay strong for his wife if he had lost John.  Their son meant the world to both of them, and they had nearly lost him. “Hey Dad,” John whispered in a hoarse voice, “I just woke up, how long was I out? What happened? Why is-”
Mike shot John a, We will talk about that later look, and John closed his mouth and just smiled. Mike then asked his son if he felt alright, and John replied, “I’m fine, I guess. Just a little sore.” When Martha first saw her son awake and talking, it stunned her into another silence. Martha hadn’t really known what she would do when she saw her son come out of the coma, but she there would certainly be tears of joy. Abruptly, Martha started sobbing on her husband’s shoulder as she tried to focus on her son’s whispering voice.
“Dad…Mom, listen to the news,” John said in a scratchy voice as everyone looked up to the television.
A reporter came on and announced in an unemotional voice, “The police have just found evidence that eleven year old John Webster was mugged by three members of the 50-50 gang..."

Tuesday, January 8, 2013

Montag's Key to Freedom


Author's Note: This is a cause/effect piece on Guy Montag from Fahrenheit 451. It is a spoiler.

Montag’s Key to Freedom
                In the book Fahrenheit 451 by: Ray Bradbury, a 30 year old firefighter lives in a society where books are outlawed. Guy Montag experiences the cause of the climax of the book and his life when he sees a woman getting burned in a fire that was meant to burn her books. The effect is that Montag realizes that me must find out what makes books so special, so he steals some books from the old lady’s house. When Montag is safe at home he starts to read the books and he learns the wonderful secrets that they hold, but when he goes to visit an old friend, the government begins to chase after him. Montag survives the chase and meets a group of men who have each memorized an individual book and one day hope to reprint them for the whole world to enjoy.
                If Guy had not realized that he needed to help save the society from the government then everyone in the city would have lost sight of what was important. Additionally, the government would have them thinking the craziest thoughts. Guy also would not have made the same friends that he did. He would have still been a lonely firefighter his whole life.
                The events in Fahrenheit 451 are similar to the events in Alex Rider: Stormbreaker. In Alex Rider Stormbreaker, Alex realizes that he has to change his frame of mind so that he can find out what happened to his parents. Alex understands that he has to help the MI6 so he can have the information he needs. Alex changed just like Guy in the sense that they both knew that they had to change so they could do what was right. Both of these characters reflect each other in few but important ways.